Friday, 26 September 2014


‘’Aaahhhhh!!!!! here comes the evil volcano witch Gemma Adcock run for your life before she boils you up in her volcano shaped tummy” said Dallas. “Thats right you silly lagoon you can run but you can’t hide” said the Gemma in a cranky voice. Gemma Adcock has been destroying towns for her whole life and she boiled children in her tummy filled in lava. She has been in different villages and the village she was in was called Volley town because the people there like to play volleyball and there are lot of dormant volcanoes. As she was searching for someone, Dallas and her friends Luisa, Linda Kiki and Shannon set a trap for the witch. Once the trap was finished the lured Gemma into the trap. They had hidden Gemma’s favourite brush into a tree that was leaning and once Gemma was climbing the tree, there was a huge rubberband tied onto a huge nail and they let the rubber band go and they slinged shot her into the air. When she was in the air she yelled “you will pay you meddling kids”

A year later the volcano which returned she came back to get revenge to the 4 friends who sling shotted her hundred feet into the air. She tried embarrassing them in front of a huge crowd but luckily they were to smart to fall for her dirty tricks. While all this nonsense was happening. They were so distracted that they never noticed that someone was behind them. That mystery person was Lightning Bolt, king of volcanoes. he was spying on the volcano witch because he  knew that she was up to know good. Once he sees her doing something bad, he will take her power away and banish her from volcano land.

In the meanwhile Luisa, Linda kiki, dallas and Shannon were getting ready to go to Hawaii to compete in a Hula contest. Along with them were the crystal clear, the girl gang that had been in their old school. Crystal clear were so jealous that   they wanted to get rid of the 5 girls. The girls did a very good job at the hola contest that they won. But as soon as they hoped in their flight back to their college the evil volcano witch threw lava at the plane and the plane crashed but hopefully they survived, leaving the volcano witch squashed underneath and that was the end of that.

The End


Lindakiki @ Glenbrae School said...

Wow Caroline great witch story also a lot of show not tell in it Good Luck.

Carolina said...

Thanks kiki Your the best

Lindakiki @ Glenbrae School said...

Well Thank you

Luisa said...

I like your story Caroline, I love how you used speech marks and you are very good at writing.

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